题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共1题:满分15分)
假如你是班长,学期结束时你要给同学作简短的评价。你班的李华这个学期变化很大,请你根据提示写一篇简评。
过去 | 功课不好,常与同学争吵,垃圾被他撒的满地都是,课桌总是一团糟。 |
现在 | 自从老师和他沟通后,有了很大变化。(学习、与同学相处、生活……) |
结果 | 父母、老师对他满意多了。 |
希望 | …… |
要求:
1.所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息,可适当发挥。
2.括号部分须用3、4句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。
3.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4.语气通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整。
5.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。
This term, Li Hua has changed a lot.
【答案】
This term, Li Hua has changed a lot..In the past he didn’t do well in his subjects. He often quarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was always in a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hard at his lessons. He gets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parents and teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.
【解析】
试题分析:本文不难写,对于作文的写作要注意详略得当,学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达,对于不会表达的意思要学会替换,同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思,这样文章才能写出新意,写出文采。
写作亮点:本文的写作对李华的过去的情况进行描写,不擅长于功课he didn’t do well in his subjects.与朋友吵架quarreled with his classmates. 垃圾被他撒的满地都是Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. 课桌总是一团糟His desk was always in a mess.然后对他现在的情况进行描写,如与同学能很好的相处gets along well with his classmates.等,再对现在的结果是父母、老师对他很满意His parents and teachers are satisfied with
him.最后提出希望I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.