题目内容
15．在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是…成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记．请以"I Am Not a Child Any More"为题，用英语写一篇词数不少于80词的短文．要求：1语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
2文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名；
3短文开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
I Am Not a Child Any More
I used to be weak and short．But now，
I realized I was not a child any more．
分析 高分句型一：The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others最重要的是我学会了理解和关心别人．这是一个主系表结构的从句；care about关心．
高分句型二：I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital直到我父母从医院回来，我才知道我母亲病了．not…until…直到…才；come back返回．
解答 I Am Not a Child Any More
I am a 16-year-old girl now．I have changed a lot，I used to be weak and short．But now，I am stronger and as tall as my mother．The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others．（高分句型一）（理解和关心他人）It was a Wednesday evening．When I went back home，no one was in．So I cooked the meal．I didn't know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital．（高分句型二）They both said the meal was very delicious，although it tasted salty．After supper，I found they were too tired，I got hot water for them．When my mother put her feet into the water，with tears in her eyes she said："Dear，you have grown up．"It was the first time that I cared about my parents．I realized I was not a child any more．（举例说明）
点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．
科学实验活动册系列答案| Hello，boys and girls， How are you getting along with your after-class English reading？I want to know what you expect most from me．I would be very thankful if you could answer the following questions： ●How long do you spend on after-class English reading every day？ ●How much do you like the selected books？ ●What do you find most helpful？ ●What do you find most difficult？ ●What suggestions do you have for after-class English reading？ Yours， Mr．Li |
Dear Mr．Li，
I'm getting along well with my reading．
Yours，
Jiang Hua．