Question

书面表达

假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

要点提示：

要求：

(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译；

(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　One possible version

My good friend

　　I have a good friend．Her name is Susan．She is 14 years old．She's from America．She's a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair．She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running．She enjoys reading books and listening to music．What's more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．So she often reads books about China．She's lovely and friendly．She gets on well with her friends．She's also helpful．She often helps me learn English．With her help, I made much progress in English．I'm lucky to have such a good friend．

　　书面表达评分标准：

　　1．评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达，初步确定其所属档次，然后根据该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

　　2．本大题满分为15分，不设小数点以下分值。按五个档次给分。

　　3．文中若出现真实的人名、校名，扣2分。