Question

【题目】HAPPY WEEKENDS向中学生征稿。写一篇80词左右的英语小短文，介绍一项你最喜欢的业余爱好（hobby），并陈述3条理由。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

My favorite hobby is camping. Firstly, it provides me with the opportunity to run away form the noisy and crowded city and have a quiet evening together with the gentle breeze and singing insects in the countryside. I was born and raised in the city and the limited space and traffic jams often make me sick. Secondly, I simply like the experience of setting up a tent and building a “house” with my own hands. Lastly, I like to be all by myself reading and thinking, and lying in my own tent is the best way to do that.

【解析】短文叙述了自己的业余爱好，所以句子的时态应该用一般现在时，句子的主语应该用第一人称，根据提示要求写3个理由，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能用汉语式的英语。要用一些连接词使上下文衔接紧密。如：provides sb with sth给某人提供某物；traffic jams交通拥挤；with one's own hands用某人自己的手；the best way to do sth做某事的最好方式。用了经典句子，如：Firstly, it provides me with the opportunity to run away form the noisy and crowded city and have a quiet evening together with the gentle breeze and singing insects in the countryside. Lastly, I like to be all by myself reading and thinking, and lying in my own tent is the best way to do that.