题目内容

请以“Sharks in Danger”为题,设计一张海报来呼吁大家从自身做起,保护鲨鱼。

要点提示:

人类吃鱼翅导致大量鲨鱼被捕杀

我们应以身作则,拒绝吃鱼翅

告诫人们;“没有买卖,就没有杀戮”

提示词汇:shark fin 鱼翅 become extinct濒临灭绝

No trading,no killing “没有买卖,就没有杀戮”

要求:语意通顺,逻辑清晰。70词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数)

Sharks in Danger

Today,more and more sharks are being killed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Let’s do something together to save the sharks.

 

Sharks in Danger

Today ,more and more sharks are being killed .Sharks are facing the problem of becoming extinct.Why do people kill them? One of the biggest problems is their fins.In many countries ,shark fin soup is an expensive dish.Fishermen keep hunting sharks for their fins and sell them for money .It’s not a story ,it’s true !So,what should we do? Don’t eat shark fins and tell the truth to our friends and families .Remember :No trading ,no killing.

Let’s do something together to save the sharks!

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇话题作文,本文所给材料要点清晰,要求明确,话题内容贴近生活实际。动笔前要认真审题,勾勒要点,并适当发挥。行文中要注意人称、时态的变化及主谓一致问题。同时注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了多种句式,使文章自然流畅。同时,使用了一些的固定句式和短语,如:keep doing、tell the truth、No trading ,no killing等,这为文章增色不少。学习中注意积累,牢记一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点:话题作文。

 

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Mrs Weeks was reading a newspaper story to her class. The story said:

Were you ever in a hospital when you were small? How did you feel? The doctors in Children's Hospital are asking for money for children's toys. Some children in the hospital must stay in bed for many weeks. Toys are needed to keep these sick children happy and quiet. Money for them can be sent to the hospital.

After Mrs. Weeks read the story, she said,"This story gave me an idea."

"You want us to bring some money for the toys.""We could bring some of our own toys for the children in the hospital, "said the boys and girls one after another.

"Well, your ideas would be nice, "Mrs. Weeks said,"but mine is different."

Mrs. Weeks smiled. "Do you think you could make toys?" she asked.

"Yes, yes," the whole class answered.

"Great! Let's begin to make toys tomorrow," said Mrs. Weeks.

On Saturday afternoon, Mrs. Weeks took the children to the hospital with the toys made by her students.

The children in the hospital felt very happy to see the toys. The children in the class felt happy, too. A few days later, Mrs. Weeks read another newspaper story to the class:

Some school pupils brought toys to Children's Hospital last week. The toys were made by the pupils of Grade Three in Green Street School. The doctors said, "We have never had so many wonderful toys. Our children are very happy with them. They say, 'THANK YOU, GRADE THREE'"

1.What was the first newspaper story mainly about?

A. Sick children in Children's Hospital

B. Doctors in Children's Hospital

C. Mrs. Weeks and her students

D. Toys made by the boys and girls

2.What "idea" did Mrs. Weeks have in mind?

A. Ask the class to give some money to the children in the hospital.

B. Ask the class to send some of their own toys to the children in the hospital.

C. Let the class make some toys themselves and give them to the children in the hospital.

D. Tell the class to go to see the children in the hospital.

3.Doctors in Children's Hospital didn't have to keep the children happy and quiet.

A. enough time B. enough boys and girls

C. enough toys D. enough doctors

4.At first, the doctors in Children's Hospital wanted to _______ the sick children.

A. give some money to B. make some toys for

C. get money to buy toys for D. borrow some toys for

5.What Mrs. Weeks really wanted to do is to _________ .

A. let everyone know her class .

B. save some money for toys .

C. make herself famous .

D. teach the pupils to do things themselves and be helpful to others .

 

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