Question

【题目】书面表达。

Lisa居住的小区里商店众多，有水果店、服装店、书店(bookstore)等。Lisa最喜欢的地方是书店，它就在Lisa家对面。每个周末Lisa喜欢去那里度过，有时去买书，有时仅为了看书。对于这个爱好读书的女孩来说，看书时，时间总是过得很快。

请根据以上提示。写一篇短文介绍Lisa及她居住的社区。

要求：60词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】Lisa lives in a noisy neighborhood．In the neighborhood，there are lots of stores like the fruit store，the clothes store and the bookstore．Lisa’s favorite place is the bookstore．It’s just across from her house．She likes to spend time there every weekend．Sometimes she goes to buy books．Sometimes she only reads books．Lisa really enjoys reading．When she reads books，she feels time go quickly．

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如live in，

in the neighborhood，lots of，across from，every weekend，enjoy doing等。而In the neighborhood，there are lots of stores like the fruit store，the clothes store and the bookstore./ When she reads books，she feels time go quickly.等复杂结构句式的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的最大亮点。