Question

【题目】 上高中后第一节英语课， 老师要求每个同学用英语做一分钟的自我介绍。 请准备一份80-100 词的发言稿， 内容应涉及以下四个方面：

1. 家庭情况 2. 学习上的强项与弱项

3. 兴趣与爱好 4. 对高中生活的期待

要求：1. 内容反映自己的真实情况，但不得在文中提及真实的人名、地名和校名；

2. 首尾已给出, 不计入总词数。

Hello, every body,

Nice to meet you. My name is Li Huan. I’m from Rainbow High School.

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Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

Hello, every body,

Nice to meet you. My name is Li Huan. I’m from Rainbow High School. Both my parents are working far away from home, so I spent most of my childhood with my grandparents. I seldom see my parents, but they love me and I understand them. We talked a lot on the phone. At school I am good at math, physics and chemistry, but I find English and Chinese rather challenging. I love small animals, Back at home we have three cats. Every time I go home, they rush out to greet me. In this new school , I am going to work together with my new teachers and new classmates to make new progress in my study, especially in my English and Chinese.

Thank you !

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，当然描写对高中生活的期待要用到be going to结构。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and、and，but等连词以及频度副词，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。