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2．据报道，中学生的身体素质有所下降．这一情况已经引起社会的关注和重视．请你代表学生会以"EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!"为题写一篇短文．为青少年体育锻炼做做宣传．
要点如下：
1．学习固然重要，但体育锻炼也很重要；
2．体育锻炼能有助于我们的身体强健，精力充沛；
3．平时锻炼方式有很多，如跑步，游泳，以及各式球类运动；
4．而如今青少年每天花在作业上的时间远远超过了锻炼身体的时间；
5．谈谈自己的看法和建议．
注意：
词数60--80，书面表达的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称．不要逐条翻译．
参考词汇：1．energetic adj．精力充沛；  2．ball games n．球类运动
            EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!
Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hou r a day，keep illness away．"__________________________

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily如果我们不做任何运动，我们可能会感到疲倦，容易生病．这是由if引导的条件状语从句，要遵循主将从现的原则；take exercise锻炼．
高分句型二：There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games我们可以做很多运动，比如跑步，游泳和球类运动．这是一个there be句型，表示有；后面是一个定语从句，先行词是sports，在定语从句中充当宾语，故可以省略．

解答 EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY!
      Study is very important to us teenagers，but either study or work is based on strong body．So health is as important as study．（学习固然重要，但体育锻炼也很重要）Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．（高分句型一）Just as the slogan says，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away!"（锻炼身体的好处）     
     There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．（高分句型二）（锻炼身体的方式）
     Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us．（自己的看法和建议）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．