Question

10．失败是成功之母．在过去的初三生活中，你是否犯过错误并从中得到了宝贵的经验与教训，从而取得进步？现在请你谈谈你自己在错误中学到的东西．
内容要求如下：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名．
2．至少从两个方面谈谈你的进步．
3．文章层次清晰，结构完整，语句连贯．
4．词数：80～100词．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你自己在错误中学到的东西．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1与人交往
2学习进步
常用到的重点短语：
make mistakes犯错误
get on with sb与某人相处
on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
keep away from 远离
with the help of sb在某人的帮助下
make progress取得进步
【高分句型】
1．①At first，②it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates，③so I④kept myself away from others．
①at first 起初
②It is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
③so表示所以，引出后一分句，表结果．
④keep away from 远离．
2．①However，②with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have③made great progress and now I ④do well in all the subjects．
①however然而，表转折．
②with the help of sb在某人的帮助下
③make progress取得进步
④do well in 擅长…

解答 During the past three years，I have made many mistakes．Also，I have got great experience from them．
On the one hand，I have become better at getting on with people．At first，it was difficult for me to get along with my classmates，so I kept myself away from others．【高分句型】Later I found out the reasons and actively made new friends．Now，I have lots of friends．（与人交往）On the other hand，I have become much more confident．In the beginning，I hated going to school and doing all the homework．I acted as a bad student．However，with the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made great progress and now I do well in all the subjects．【高分句型】（学业进步）

点评 提纲作文注意：
1．仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点．
2．提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，
   按照一定逻辑关系来写．
3．根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．