题目内容
【题目】小作文,根据要求完成下面内容,词数:30—40 词。 (5分)
难忘的初中生活即将结束,同学们在老师的帮助下取得了很大进步。此时此刻,你一定有很多的心里话要对老师说。请给你的老师写一封感谢信,表达你的心情。(信中不准出现真实校名和姓名)
【答案】
Dear Mr. Wang,
How time flies! I have to say goodbye to you now. Thank you, my dear teacher.
You are one of the best teachers in our school. You teach us so well. You often help me with my studies. When I am in trouble, you always give me good advice. With your help, I have made much progress in my studies. I arn lucky to be your student.
I will never forget you. No matter what places I am going to, we will be together forever.
Best wishes!
Your student,
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文为话题类作文,难忘的初中生活即将结束,同学们在老师的帮助下取得了很大进步。要求给你的老师写一封感谢信,表达你的心情。写作要求明确,故要完成写作任务,务必把对老师的感谢之情表达清楚。
写作亮点:本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务,要点全面,结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动,例如I have to say goodbye to you now. With your help, I have made much progress in my studies. 时间状语从句When I am in trouble, you always give me good advice.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之,该文是一篇不错的短文。