Question

【题目】文段表达

根据中文和英文提示，用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友Peter想了解你学校的大致情况，你通常在学校做些什么，以及你在学校学习、生活的感受。请根据他提出的以下问题给他回复一封邮件。

提示词语：library, science, hall, interesting, favourite, play, join, club, enjoy

Dear Peter,

How is everything going? I'm writing to tell you about my new school.

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Anything new at your school?

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Peter,

How is everything going? I'm writing to tell you about my new school. It's a big school. There are about three thousand students in my school. There are six buildings: a classroom building, an office building, a science building, a library, a dining hall and a sports hall. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. Most of the classes are very interesting. We often read our favourite books in the library. We can play basketball, badminton and table-tennis in the sports hall. After school, we often join different clubs. My new school life is really interesting. I feel very happy and enjoy my life here.

Anything new at your school?

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，以李华的名义给英国笔友Peter写一封信介绍自己的学校。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It's...，There are...，We have...，We can....，My new school life is...，I feel...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。根据提纲中所要求的话题进行阐述。

亮点说明：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头写了写信的目的，要介绍我的新学校，接下来介绍我在学校的学习，生活和感受，最后询问Peter他的学校有什么新鲜事情。此处write to, tell sb about sth, play basketball, the sport hall, after school, 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。