Question

15．初中四年，一定有很多事情让你难以忘怀．这些事情让你感到或是高兴，或是难过，或是幸运，或是愧疚…请写一篇100词左右的英语短文，记述你印象最深刻 一件事，并表达出自己的感受．
注意：
1．书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥．
2．文中不得出现真实的地区，学校及姓名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I was ①so happy that I found ②it useful to learn English我很开心我发现学习英语很有用．
①so…that如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．
②it作为形式宾语，动词不定式做真正宾语．
【高分句型二】
We felt so excited when we watched the dolphin show．当我看海豚表演的时候我很兴奋．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 Last May Day holiday，My parents and I went to Nan Tong．This experience impressed me most．In the morning，we went sightseeing on the Wolf Hill．I met a foreigner and talked in English when I climbed the hill．I was so happy that I found it useful to learn English．【高分句型一】Then we went to the Horticultural Exposition．We enjoyed many kinds of flowers and took lots of photos．We learned a lot about the flowers．We felt so close to nature and had a lot of fun there．
 In the afternoon，I learned a lot about the names of the fish when we enjoyed the Undersea World．We felt so excited when we watched the dolphin show．【高分句型二】Later that day，we took a boat trip on the Haohe River．I enjoyed the beautiful views （and sang happily） all the way．（经过）
We had such an exciting trip that we will never forget it．We hope to visit it again some day．（感受）

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．