Question

【题目】书面表达（共15分）

写作：假如你是Simon，你想推荐你班同学Sandy为本学期最佳学生奖(the Best Student Award)得主，请根据下列要点写一封推荐信(不少于70个词)：

1. 聪明，学东西快，各门功课学得很好。对中国历史了解很多。

2. 考虑问题细致，计划周全，是“助人为乐俱乐部”的一员，参与各种活动，如：经常在车上给老人让座，为贫穷地区的孩子们捐款。

3. 擅长运动擅长打篮球，是校篮球队的成员, 有时教新成员打篮球。

4. 对人友好，乐于助人，我们都喜欢他。

Dear Sir/Madam

I’d like to

Yours faithfully

Simon

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I’d like to recommend Sandy to be the Best Student Award. The reasons are the follows.

Sandy is very clever and she learns things quickly. She studies all her subjects well. Besides, she knows a lot about Chinese history. She thinks a lot and plans well before she does things. She is a member of Help Others Club and she joins many activities. For example, she often makes room for the old on the bus. She also donates money for children in poor areas.

She is good at playing basketball and she is on our school basketball team. Sometimes she teaches new members to play basketball. She is friendly to others and is always ready to help others. We all like her.

Yours faithfully,

Simon

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以Simon的身份给学校写一封推荐信，推荐Sandy为本学期最佳学生奖。我们要在信中说明推荐Sandy的原因，题目中给出了我们具体的写作提纲，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，注意语句通顺，符合英语的表达规范，内容全面，不要遗漏要点。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该使用一般现在时态，第三人称单数she来表达，因此我们要特别注意句中谓语动词的形式，都要用第三人称单数形式。另外，我们还需要注意表达的连贯和流畅，多使用我们学过的句型和短语，还有一些连词，可以使短文意思更连贯。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者按照题目要求完成了一封推荐信。短文的意思非常完整，语句也很通顺，表达也比较流畅。首先作者先点明了写信的目的，I’d like to recommend Sandy to be the Best Student Award，一句话带过，意思非常简洁，但是也达到了目的。短文的中心集中在表述推荐Sandy的原因上，作者分成了两段来表达。这一部分是短文的重点内容，作者按照题目列出的提纲进行了翻译，但是同时也注意使用了一些连词，将一些语句连接，使文章语意连贯。这一部分中使用的比较好的句型有：Besides, she knows a lot about Chinese history.、She is a member of Help Others Club and she joins many activities、She is good at playing basketball and she is on our school basketball team、She is friendly to others and is always ready to help others等。