Question

Writing 2 (2015江苏南京鼓楼区)

    初中三年，你一定结识了许多同窗好友，他们中有的安静沉 稳，有的活泼开朗，有的品学兼优，请你挑选一位你印象最深刻 的好朋友，以“The friend who has impressed me most” 为题写一篇 英语短文，并涵盖以下三个问题：

1. What is he/she like?

2. Why has he/she impressed you most? ( Give one or two examples. )

3. What do you want to say to him/her before graduating from junior high?

注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计人总词数。

      The friend who has impressed me most

    The friend who has impressed me most is 

Answer 1

Writing 2

[写作提示]

1. 审题：

这是一篇记叙文。涉及时态较多，要正确使用。

2. 确定要点：

(1) 说出你印象最深刻的好朋友；

(2) 他/她的容貌、性格；

(3) 你们的相处；

(4) 举1 一2个例子说明朋友对你的帮助；

(5) 你对朋友的感激之情；

(6) 你想对朋友说的心里话。

[参考范文]

    The friend who has impressed me most The friend who has impressed me most is Wang Gang. He is tall and strong.He is so humorous that I never feel bored when he is with me. He is also helpful and helps me a lot. We often have a good time together.

    One Sunday last year,we went to climb Zijin Mountain together.I was so careless that I fell over on the way to the mountain. Wang Gang helped me all the way and finally sent me to the hospital. I was very grateful to him.

    We will graduate from junior high soon.I want to say,Wang Gang,you are my best friend.I will remember you forever. I hope your dream will come true soon."