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14.根据表格提示,以"My Day"为题目,写一篇50词左右的短文.请根据以下中文提示,介绍一下你的日常生活情况.
1.7:00起床,7:30上学
2.最喜欢的科目是音乐课,不喜欢数学和历史
3.放学后踢半个小时足球
4.晚上8点到9点做家庭作业
5.10点睡觉.

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.
高分句型:
①After school I often play football for half an hour  with my classmates.放学后我经常和同学们踢半个小时的足球.play football 表示踢足球,中间不需要加冠词,half an hour表示半小时,表示一段时间.
②In the evening,I often do my  homework from 8:00 to 9:00,and then watch TV.晚上8点到9点我经常做家庭作业,然后看电视.句子中from…to…表示从…到…,do one's homework表示做作业.

解答 My Day
I usually get up at 7:00.Then  Ieat breakfast at 7:10.After breakfast  I go to school at 7:30.(起床及上学时间) I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon.My favorite subject is music.I don't like math and history.(最喜欢与最不喜欢的科目)After school I often play football for half an hour  with my classmates.(高分句型)(体育活动)In the evening,I often do my  homework from 8:00 to 9:00,and then watch TV.I go to bed at 10:00.(高分句型)(做作业及休息时间)This is my day.(结束语)

点评 本文属于提纲类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

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