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3．随着手机功能日益增多，越来越多的年轻人沉迷于手机娱乐活动，成为"手机控"一族．请你根据两幅漫画和以下提示写一篇短文．

"手机控"的表现	沉迷于手机娱乐活动（聊天看电影等），与朋友和家人的交流减少，离开手机会有焦虑等异常情绪表现…
"手机控"的危害	对健康不利，影响学习，走路时看手机尤其危险…
你的建议	…

参考词汇：
手机控：a phine freak 焦虑的：anxious  沉迷于：be addicted to…微信：wechat
低头族：phubbing
注意：1．内容包括所给提示信息，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.90个单词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
Today many people，especially young people，have become phone freaks．They                ．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①Besides，②focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students'study．另外，沉迷于手机娱乐会影响学生的学习．
①besides 另外
②动名词短语做主语．focus on专注于．
【高分句型二】
①If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time ②to think about phone entertainment如果他们这样让自己的时间充满，就不会有更多的空闲时间去想手机娱乐．
①if 引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．
②动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 Today many people，especially young people，are phone freaks．They spend a lot of time playing games，seeing movies，or reading novels on their smart phone，and thus communicate with their family and friends less．Without phone in hand，they will feel anxious and don't know what to do．（"手机控"的表现）As we know，too long screen time is not good for health．It does great harm to our neck and eyes．Besides，focusing on mobile phone entertainment can affect students'study【高分句型一】．It can also be dangerous if you do it when crossing a street（"手机控"的危害）I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends．They should also pay more attention to their studies．If they fill their time this way，they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment．【高分句型二】（我的建议）

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