Question

16．假如你叫李磊，你的英语外教Mr．Black 上个月回国工作了．请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件以示感谢．谈谈他对你有哪些帮助；在他的帮助下，你有哪些变化；你向他学到了哪些好的品质．
提示词语：thank，remember，difficult，give up，encourage，make a great progress，kind…
提示问题：●Why do you thank him？
●How did your life/study change？
●What can you learn from him？
Dear Mr．Black，
                                                                       
Best wishes to you!
Yours，Li Lei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up一年前，我不擅长英语，所以我想放弃它．be good at是一个固定短语，表示擅长于；so表示结果，give up是一个固定短语，意思是放弃．
高分句型二：With your help，I have made great progress．在你的帮助下，我取得了很大的进步．with one's help是一个固定短语，意思是在某人的帮助下；make great progress是一个固定短语，意思是取得巨大进步．

解答 I'm writing this letter to thank you for your help．You are a kind and friendly teacher（老师的好品质）．One year ago，I was not good at English，so I wanted to give it up．（高分句型一） You encouraged me and told me how to learn English well． With your help，I have made great progress．（高分句型二） Now I am interested in English．（说明老师对我学习英语的帮助及我的变化） I think I am so lucky to be your student．I learned a lot from you，I will help others like you（向老师学到的好品质）．I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy．（对老师的祝福）

点评 在写作时，要尽量使用高分单词，短语和句子，句式，以便为文章增色．