Question

【题目】学校打算从你们班推荐一名同学获“青年之星奖”，Jim和Jane是两名候选人，有同学推荐Jim，有同学推荐Jane。假如你是Li Ping，你会推荐谁，理由是什么？请根据表格中的信息给负责人吴老师写一封推荐信，向他汇报具体情况。

观点	理由
推荐Jim	聪明，学东西很快；经常帮助同学
推荐Jane	做事有计划，积极参加各种活动；是Project Hope中的一员
你推荐……	列举该同学的品质和能力和事迹等等

要求：①表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；②必须包括表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥；③100词左右（开头和结尾不计入总词数）④不得出现真实姓名和校名等
Dear Mr. Wu,
We discussed whether Jim or Jane should get this year's Yong Star Award. But we have different recommendations.

Some students agree that Jim should get the award.
I hope my letter will be some help to you.

Yours sincerely
Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Wu,
We discussed whether Jim or Jane should get this year's Yong Star Award. But we have different recommendations.
Some students agree that Jim should get the award. Because Jim is often praised by teachers for his excellent grades. Though a few words, he learns about the history of our Yangzhou City. Also he speaks English wonderfully.
However, other students think Jane is better. It's true that Jane's Grades are not so good, but she is willing to do extra work for the class in her spare time.
In my opinion, I prefer Jane to be the volunteer. As we all know, a volunteer must be good at communication and be ready to devote his /her time to people in trouble. And Jane has the quality.
I hope my email will be of some value to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【解析】这是一篇提纲作文，内容要求以班长Li Ping的名义，根据汉语提示和表格给学校负责人吴先生写一份电子邮件，向他汇报你班招募志愿者的具体情况。Jim和Jane是两名候选人，班上的A组同学推荐Jim，B组同学推荐Jane。你会推荐谁，理由是什么？本文应该一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，写作中注意一些常见句式的应用和多种句式交替运用。还有叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。