Question

2．平安是福．自然界的地震和其他灾害、生活中的突发事件都可能真实地发生，它们有可能会危及我们的生命或影响我们的生活．请你根据你所掌握的安全常识，就如何应对某些突发事件以"Keeping Safe"为题写一篇文章． 词数：70词左右．需要时可使用下面的提示词或词组． flood n．水灾 fire n．火灾 traffic accident n．交通事故 get hurt 受伤
Keeping Safe．
It's very important for us to keep safe on the street．We should obey the traffic rules．When the red light is on，we must stop and we are not allowed to go on walking．It's safe to cross the road when the light is green．When we want to cross the road，we'd etter look left and right to make sure we are safe．Don't forget that it's very dangerous to play on the strees．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
It's very important for us to keep safe on the street对我们来说，在街上保持安全是很重要的．这是it is+形容词+for sb．to do  sth．句型，对于…来说…是…的．
高分句型二
When the red light is on，we must stop and we are not allowed to go on walking红灯亮时，我们必须停下来，不能过马路．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 Keeping Safe
It's very important for us to keep safe on the street【高分句型一，注意it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】【开篇点明主题】．We should obey the traffic rules．When the red light is on，we must stop and we are not allowed to go on walking．【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】It's safe to cross the road when the light is green．When we want to cross the road，we'd etter look left and right to make sure we are safe．Don't forget that it's very dangerous to play on the strees．【正文部分详细介绍如何安全过马路】．

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