题目内容
【题目】文段表达(15分)
根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华,最近和美国朋友Jim通过邮件谈论各自的校园生活,他想了解在学校里你最喜欢哪位教师。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。
提示词语:love, hardworking, patient, encourage, tell
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To Jim From Li Hua Subject My favourite teacher Hi! Jim, I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua |
【答案】
Hi! Jim,
I’m glad to hear from you. I love all the teachers in my school. My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang.
She is a hardworking and experienced music teacher. She loves music, she loves her job, and she is always patient with her students.
She encourages me to follow my dream of music. She often tells me the most important thing in our life is to be an honest and responsible person. She says love can make music more beautiful. She has great influence on me, and I want to be a person like her.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:通过审题,可知本篇写作的体裁为电子邮件类的应用文。信的开头和结尾已给出,所以不需要关注舒心的格式。学生要根据题目要求和要点提示,确定内容的要点 。1.Who is your favourite teacher ? 2.What is he /she like ? 3.Why do you like him/her ? 三个要点缺一不可,必须全部包括。
写作提示:通过题目要求可以看出,1.本文可能使用的时态是一般现在时。可能用到的句型或短语有:My favourite teacher is ...,experienced,fridenly to,be patient with....,makes his/her classes interesting,encourage sb to do sth.等等。2.三个要点是文章的组成部分,围绕每一个要点展开叙述,缺一不可,同时充分利用参考词汇,丰富写作内容。3.最后检查全文,使行文流畅,语法拼写要正确。