Question

【题目】 为响应我市全面创建国家文明城市的号召，丽水市中小学开展“文明城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

Subject	The Civilized City, the Healthy Life
Ways of doing	ride bikes, reduce air pollution, throw rubbish into the bins, keep the city clean, plant more trees,…
Your opinion	……(至少2条)

注意：

(1)词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

(2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。

The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】The Civilized City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Lishui, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.

【解析】

试题这是一篇话题作文。话题是“The Civilized City, the Healthy Life”；并给了一些提示和注意事项：(1)词数80-100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

(2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，要用上提示词，并适当发挥，要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，最后写出你的观点。注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意单词拼写，不要犯单词拼写错误，字数要符合要求。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；要点全面，结构连贯；语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，没有单词拼写错误，字数符合题目要求。