Question

20．下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼．请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议．信的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Tom，
My classmate，Lucy，bought a new pen．I liked it very much，so I used it without her permission．Unluckily，I broke it．Then I put it back secretly．Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me．I don't know what to do．Can you help me？
Yours，
Daming
Dear Daming，
I know your problem．You've made two mistakes．First，you used your classmate's pen withouther permission．Second，when you broke the pen，you didn't tell her the truth．Yes，you must tell her immediately．If you tell her the truth，perhaps she'll beangry with you，but at least you'll prove you are honest．
Then I thinkyou should offer to pay．You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen forher．She will realize that you're truly sorry．
I hope theadvice can help you．I'm sure you will make up with her soon．
Yours，
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①If you tell her the truth，perhaps she'll ②be angry with you，but ③at least you'll prove④you are honest．如果你告诉她真相，也许她会生你的气，但至少你将证明你是诚实的．
①if引导的条件状语从句，时态遵循主将从现．
②be angry with sb对某人生气
③at least 至少
④prove后为宾语从句，省略了引导词that
高分句型二：
I'm sure①you will ②make up with her soon．我相信你很快就会和她和好．
①I'm sure后跟宾语从句，连接词that被省略．
②make up with sb 与某人和好

解答 One possible version：
Dear Daming，
I know your problem．You've made two mistakes．First，you used your classmate's pen without her permission．Second，when you broke the pen，you didn't tell her the truth．【指出大明的问题】Yes，you must tell her immediately．If you tell her the truth，perhaps she'll be angry with you，but at least you'll prove you are honest．【高分句型一】
Then I think you should offer to pay．You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen forher．She will realize that you're truly sorry．【给大明提出建议】
I hope the advice can help you．I'm sure you will make up with her soon．【高分句型二】【我的希望】
Yours，
Tom．

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