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书面表达

假设你是学校Health Club的成员,最近你对你校学生进行了一项有关生活方式(our lifestyle)的调查,相关信息见下表。请根据表格内容为校广播站写一篇60词左右的英文广播稿。广播稿的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

交通方式

很多学生坐公共汽车上学,一些学生由家长开车送到,很少(a few)骑车或走路上学;

饮食和运动

喜欢吃汉堡,冰激淋;不喜欢吃水果和蔬菜;很少锻炼。

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want to tell you something about our lifestyle.

                                                                           

                                                                           

                                                                             

 

【答案】

Hello everyone! I’m from The Health Club. I want tell you something about our lifestyle. Many students go to school by bus, some students go to school in their parents’ cars. But only a few students goes to school by bike or on foot. And they like hamburgers and ice cream, but they don’t often eat fruit and vegetables. The students don’t exercise often. I think it’s bad for their health.

【解析】

试题分析:本文的写作首先对写作的总体目的进行陈述I want tell you something about our lifestyle.来表达写作的目的。然后根据文章的提纲来讲述学生们的交通出行方式,如by bus,in their parents’ cars,by bike or on foot来表达相应的意思。最后对学生们的饮食习惯进行介绍并提出自己的观点。

考点:提纲类写作

点评:初中英语的作文特别是初一的作文,着重考察学生连词成句的能力,要在“准”字上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面。对于中学作文的写作,尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中,写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章,不要出现中式英文。在平时的练习中,注意多背诵范文,对于写的好的句子进行默写,考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。

 

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       假设你是9年级学生Daniel,你遇到了一些问题,你写信给21世纪英文报的“知心大姐”栏目,希望得到帮助。问题如下:
    1.作业太多,经常熬夜,感到疲劳;
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    4.父母只关心考试分数,很少交流.
    注意:
    1.信的内容必须包含所列问题,并在信尾提出要求,希望得到帮助。可适当发挥,使行文通顺连贯;
    2.词数:90左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
    3.提示:keep a balance  取得平衡
Dear agony aunt,
     I'm a Grade 9 student. These days I have some problems, and I don't know how to deal with them.
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                                                                                                                                                 Yours, 
                                                                                                                                                 Daniel

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