Question

5．熊熊是个很聪明的学生，住在射阳，但他有一些不好的习惯，请你根据下面表格提供的信息，用英文写一篇短文，并针对他存在的一些问题提出合理的建议．
姓名熊 熊
班级七年级一班
外貌大眼睛、矮而胖，戴眼镜
喜欢唱歌、听音乐，喜欢吃汉堡，喝可乐
不喜欢不喜欢游泳、跑步，吃蔬菜
寒假打算放烟花，吃饺子，看舞狮，玩电脑游戏
建议至少两条
具体要求：
1．不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整．
3．内容必须包括上表中的要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥．
Xiong Xiong is a clever student．He lives in Sheyang．He studies in a middle School．He is in Class 1，Grade 7．He isn't tall but fat．He has big eyes．He wears glasses．
He likes singing and listening to music．He likes having snacks between meals，but he doesn't like eating vegetables．He likes hamburgers and coke．He also dislikes swimming and running．
He plans to play fireworks，eat dumplings，watch lion dance and play computer games．
I think he must change his lifestyle．He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health．He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think he must change his lifestyle我认为他必须改变生活方式．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health他应该多吃蔬菜因为对健康有好处．
because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 Xiongxiong is a clever student．He lives in sheyang．He studies in a middle School．He is in Class 1，Grade 7．He isn't tall but fat．He has big eyes．He wears glasses．（基本信息和外貌）
He likes singing and listening to music．He likes having snacks between meals，but he doesn't like eating vegetables．He likes hamburgers and coke．He also dislikes swimming and running．（喜好）
He plans to play fireworks，eat dumplings，watch lion dance and play computer games．（寒假打算）
I think he must change his lifestyle【高分句型一】．He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health．He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time．（建议）

点评 这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．