题目内容
7.人生有许多美好的东西值得去追求.青春是美好的,是不可复制的,大家正在度过人生最美好的时光,也都在为美好的人生而努力奋斗.初中的生活即将结束,你一定为自己设计了美好的前景,请写出你的想法.写作提示:1、你追求的人生理想是什么.
2、你正在从哪些方面努力来实现你的理想.
3、如果有一天你实现了理想,你将怎样回报你的父母,回报社会.
写作要求:1、可根据自身实际,自主表达.字数90词左右.
2、逻辑清楚,行文流畅,语句通顺.
3、文中请勿出现真实姓名和校名.
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分析 高分句型一
I want to be a doctor when I grow up.当我长大以后要做一个医生,这是一个when引导的时间状语从句,当…时候.
高分句型二
I know If I want to become a doctor I must study hard now我知道如果我想成为一名医生,我现在必须努力学习.I know 后面手一个宾语从句,里面又有一个if引导的条件状语从句,主句是含有情态动词的句子,从句用的是一般现在时.
解答 Everyone has their own dreams,I am the same,I want to be a doctor when I grow up【要点一,理想是什么】.M father is a doctor and he often says doctors are great,I know If I want to become a doctor I must study hard now【要点二,要实现理想应该怎么做】.I think it's a great and interesting job.I can help many patients.It's a hard job but I don't mind it【要点三,你实现了理想之后怎么做】.I don't think this job makes me tired,I think it makes me happy.I believe I am sure to succeed.That is all of my dream job.I am sure I will be a good doctor in the future.
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑
关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.
--That's true.But I'm afraid there will be more traffic jams.( )
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