Question

8．你校学生会以"初三学生要不要参加春游活动"为题，向初三学生做调查．请你根据下表所出示的结果，以"Whether or Not Should Junior 3Students Go Spring Outing？"为题写一篇短文，上交学生会．

65%的学生认为应该春游	35%的学生认为不应该春游	你的观点：春游有很多其他活动无法比拟的优势
1他们可亲近自然，听到淙淙的水声和飒飒的风声	1有太多作业要做	1…
2春游给身心带来安宁	2春游就是浪费时间	2…

注意：1词数90左右，开头不计入总词数．
2必须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺．
Whether or Not Should Junior 3Students Go Spring Outing？
We have had a heated discussion on whether Junior students should go spring outing.65percent students think                                  

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They think①they have too much homework to do and it's②a waste of time．他们认为他们有太多的作业要做，春游是浪费时间．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
a waste of浪费…
【高分句型二】
We can feel relaxed if we go spring outing．如果我们春游我们感觉很放松．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词，从句用一般现在时．

解答 Whether or Not Should Junior 3 Students Go Spring Outing
We have had a heated discussion on whether Junior 3 students should go spring outing.65% of the students think they should go spring outing．Because they can be close to nature．They can also feel the running water and the blowing wind．（他们可亲近自然，听到淙淙的水声和飒飒的风声）It can also bring peace to their mind and body．（春游给身心带来安宁）However，35% of the students don't agree．They think they have too much homework to do and it's a waste of time．【高分句型一】（有太多作业要做，春游就是浪费时间）I think going spring outing has many advantages over other activities．We can feel relaxed if we go spring outing．【高分句型二】We can also achieve a balance between work and rest．（春游有很多其他活动无法比拟的优势）

点评 这是一篇图表给出材料的作文，图表中给出的材料较为丰富，考生在写作时，图表内容必须包括在内．在自己的观点部分，考生需要自己适当的发挥，建议考生在平时的英语学习中积累一些常用到的重点句型和短语，出彩的发挥会给文章增色不少．