Question

19．王华是个动画迷，痴迷动画片，上个星期他去电影院看了《疯狂动物城》这部电影，觉得非常好．他想向同学介绍这部影片．假设你就是王华，请根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的文章，介绍这部电影．内容提示如下：
1 动物城是（Zootopia）一座人口众多的现代化大都市，各种各样的动物在这里相处融洽；
2 一只名叫Judy的小兔子小时候就梦想成为一名警察，经过多年的努力，她的梦想实现了；
3Judy成为了一名交通警察，但是她希望通过她的努力帮助更多的人；
4 有一次Judy碰巧发现了一条重要线索，她和Nick成功地找回了失踪的动物；
5我认为…
注意：
1文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2 第5点的内容必须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
Wanghua is crazy about cartoons．Last Saturday he saw a film called Zootopia at the cinema．                  

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：There is a little rabbit named Judy and had dreamed of becoming a policeman when she was a child．状语从句
句型二：I believed in what we were doing，though，so I just kept going．宾语从句

解答 The Zootopia is a large modern city with a large population of animals．There is a little rabbit named Judy and had dreamed of becoming a policeman when she was a child．【高分句型一】After years of hard work，her dream came true．Judy became a traffic cop，but she wanted to help more people with her efforts．Once Judy happened to find an important clue，Nick and she ssucceeded in retrieving the missing animal．I believed in what we were doing，though，so I just kept going．[【高分句型二】I will be uccessful one day．

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，所以平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．