Question

【题目】假设你是Shirley。你的笔友李华和父母之间有一点小矛盾，想向你倾述。下面是

他给你的电子邮件。请你根据他的邮件内容写一封回信,谈谈你对这件事的看法和理由，

同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。

Dear Shirley, Recently I had some trouble with my parents. Because the mid-term examination (期中考试) is drawing near, they both push me hard. They always ask me to study all the time. You see, I have a pet dog and I often play with him after school. But my parents don’t allow me to keep it now. I feel so much pressure. Can you be kind enough to give me some suggestions? Yours, Li Hua

要求：1. 回信须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥。

2. 不少于60词，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to learn about your trouble. ________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Shirley

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I’m sorry to learn about your trouble.

First I want you to comfort yourself by having a nice walk outside. To keep calm is important for you to deal with these matters. In fact, I disagree with your parents’ idea. It’s true that students should work hard on their study especially when the mid-term exam is coming. However, to feed a pet dog doesn’t harm your study. It is a good way to relax yourself. We all know that we can study better after proper relaxing.

I think you should have a good talk with your parents. Tell them your ideas and your study plan. I think they will understand and support you finally.

I hope what I said can be of some help to you.

Yours, Shirley

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以Shirley的名义，根据笔友李华写给Shirley邮件内容写一封回信，动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；谈谈你对这件事的看法和理由，同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯。为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。

写作亮点：本文要点明确，语言精练。层次分明。阐明了自己对这件事的看法，并提出了一些合理化的建议。不同要点英语使用的句式也不一样。语言的表述符合语法的结构，复合句It’s true that students should work hard on their study especially when the mid-term exam is coming.表达的非常到位。最后给出的建议也比较 合理：I think you should have a good talk with your parents. Tell them your ideas and your study plan.是一篇比较不错的佳作。