题目内容

姓名

Li Ming

年龄

13岁

居住地

江苏南京

长相

短发,个子很高,戴眼镜

品格

学习勤奋,擅长英语和数学

所在学校班级

阳光中学,七年级一班

爱好

游泳,玩电脑游戏,经常在周末和同学一起踢足球,梅西(Messi)是他最喜欢的运动员和偶像

理想

当一名足球运动员

注意 1. 请正确地使用人称;

2. 短文必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;

3. 要求语言通顺,段落清楚,句子连贯,书写规范;

4. 词数80左右。

 

 

 

 

WangMing is my friend . He is thirteen years old. He lives in Suzhou,Jiangsu. He is a student of Sunshine Secondary School。Now,he is in Class One,Grade Seven.

He is a tall boy with short hair. He wears glasses. He is polite and helpful. He is willing to help others.

He works very hard He is good at English and maths.

He likes swimming and playing computer games. He often plays football with his classmates at the weekend. Messi is his favourite football player. Messi is his hreo!He wants to be a football player when he grows up .

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍我的朋友王明。主要介绍他的年龄,居住地,长相,品格,爱好,理想等。表所给的内容十分的详细。在写作中注意主谓一致,句子条理通顺就可以了。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当,注意到了第三人称单数的应用。同时能使用 一些短语,如a tall boy with short hair.,is willing to,is good at等。

考点:表格作文。

 

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