题目内容
【题目】幸福无处不在。幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福来自老师赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是……每个人都有自己的幸福,某英语网站正在征集英文稿件,请以“My Happiness”为题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事。它是什么时候发生的,发生了什么让你感到幸福,以及你现在对幸福的看法。
提示词语:mark,be afraid,encourage,be moved,love
提示问题: ● When did it happen?
● What happened to make you feel happy?
● What do you think of happiness?
My Happiness
As we know,happiness is everywhere and it may be the same for everyone. ____________________________
【答案】As we know,happiness is everywhere and it may be the same for everyone.
I will never forget what happened when I was in Grade 9. I had a bad mark at a math test. I was too afraid to tell my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened. Then they told me that they believed I could do better the next time. They also encouraged me to keep on trying. I was moved and made up my mind to work harder.
I think happiness is the deep love from parents.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们以My Happiness为题目写一篇征文,讲述自己对幸福的理解。文章中应主要包括以下内容:首先是介绍一件曾经发生过的令你幸福的事情:它是什么时候发生的、为什么让你幸福;然后是介绍你现在对幸福的看法。文章的主体部分应为第一部分,学生们应将这件事叙述清楚,并解释使你幸福的原因。这是一篇半开放式的作文,题目中只给出了话题,具体的写作内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力来补充完成。这种作文题目自由性较高,学生们可以自由发挥,但一定不要脱离主题。写作时,注意使用正确的时态、人称,并应注意英语表达的习惯,从简单句入手,点缀复合句或较复杂的句型。语句之间使用过度或连接成分,使文章表达流畅,意思连贯。