Question

20．在黔南州建州六十周年到来之际，请你以自愿者Li Hua的身份向中外友人宣传我们的家乡---黔南，并倡导大家做文明市民，让家乡变得更加美丽．
要点提示：
1．介绍你的家乡：①美丽的风景；②宜人的气候；③传统的工艺；④悠久的茶文化
2．倡导：①诚实友善；②乐于助人；③保护环境，低碳生活；
3．你的希望．
要求：
1．必须用上以上信息，可适当发挥；
2．要求句子连贯，语意通顺，书写规范；
3．词数不少于80词，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
参考词汇：traditional arts，citizen（市民），low-carbon（低碳）
Hello!My name is Li Hun．I'm a middle school student．Welcome to my hometown---Qiannan．It lies in the south of Guizhou provine．        ．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本题是一篇提纲作文，要求根据有关提示，介绍黔南，并倡导大家做文明市民，让家乡变得更加美丽．根据提示信息，短文要从"介绍"和"倡导"两个方面进行写作．短文用一般现在时态，主要用第一人称及第三人称形式．
高分句型：
1．It's popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air．它很受人们的欢迎，不仅是因为它的非常好的天气，还有它的新鲜空气．
not only…but also…不但，而且，连接前后两个并列的成分；be popular with固定短语 受…欢迎；for介词表原因；fantastic weather 意为"非常好的天气"．
2．It's necessary for us to protect the environment and we should live a low-carbon life．我们有必要保护环境，我们应该过一种低碳生活．
此句运用了固定句式it+be+adj+for sb to do sth"对于某人做某事是…的"，it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语；and连接前后两个分句，表并列；live a low-carbon life过一种低碳生活，live a…life过一种…的生活．

解答 One possible version：
Hello!My name is Li Hua．I'm a middle school student．Welcome to my hometown-Qiannan．It lies in the south of Guizhou Province．There are many beautiful places，such as Xiaoqikong，Doupeng Hill and so on．It's popular with people not only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh air．【高分句型】It also has many traditional arts with their own national forms．What's more，it's famous for tea，such as Duyun Maojian，Guiding Yunwu，etc【介绍家乡】
As a citizen in Qiannan，it's our duty to make our hometown better．I think we should be honest and kind．We are ready to help others．It's necessary for us to protect the environment and we should live a low-carbon life．【高分句型】【倡导】
In my opinion，if everyone tries his best to do something for our hometown，it will become more and more beautiful．【我的希望】
Thank you!

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，在写作中要做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；   三思：词汇-＞短语-＞句式； 三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯．