Question

13．美国朋友Smith先生五年前参观过你的学校，他最近来信希望了解你校的现况． 假设你是李华，请参照下面图表所提供的信息，给他写一封回信，介绍你校的变化．
注意：回信必须包括图表的主要内容，可以适当发挥，使内容连贯；词数100左右．信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数．请将答案填写在答题卡指定的位置．

总体面貌	校园变化很大，新建多座大楼，呈现新貌．
具体陈述	图书馆和和实验楼并排，位于教学楼后面； 图书馆藏书丰富，实验设备齐全	2010年建成
	扩建操场，是原来的两倍大	去年建成
	拟建餐厅，在南面，操场对面	明年建
校貌	校园内外种满鲜花、树木具体描述

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是根据图表信息介绍我校的变化，时态用一般过去时和一般将来时．人称用第一人称与第三人称．写作要点包括：1．总体面貌 2．具体陈述 3．校貌．常用的重点句型和短语：In general总之，as large as与…一样大，be satisfied with对…满意，if possible如果可能的话等．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
I was very happy to receive your letter informing me that you want to know some changes about our school．And I'm glad to tell youWhen you visited our school five years ago，its facilities were quite simple and crude．But now it has changes a lot．．（总体面貌） In general，there are lots of trees planted around our school （样貌）（高分句型）． The library and the lab building were built in 2010．They both lie the behind of the teaching building．There are many books in the library and the lab facilities are all in readiness（齐全的）．Last year，a new playground was built，it is two times as large as the original（高分句型）．Next year，we will build a dinning hall，it will lie in the south of our school，across from the playground．The students are satisfied with the new changes． （具体陈述）We hope that you can visit us again if possible．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

点评 写作之前要先审题，图表内容要包括在作文中，并对图表进行横向和纵向的比较，本题中图表内容较为简单，要注意句式的多样性，适当的使用宾语从句，转折词however，连词and等．考生可在作文之前对每部分列出大致的提纲，做到主题明确，条理清楚．可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫．注意行文连贯，书写规范，不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误．