Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下面的提示用英文写一篇80字左右的短文，题目为“My best friend---Lucy”。

1.Lucy是我最好的朋友，圆脸，笑眯眯的大眼睛；

2.很有耐心，经常关心他人，从不说别人的坏话；

3.有一副好嗓子，在一次唱歌比赛中唱得最好；

3.理想中的学校每天上午9点开始上课，下午3:30放学 ；

4.只有1小时的回家作业；有足够的时间进行课外活动；

5.她希望……

注意点：

1．介绍须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2．第5要点须补充完整。

My best friend---Lucy

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请根据下列要点，写一篇短文，意思通顺。Lucy是我最好的朋友，看起来很惹人喜爱。上个月，她参加了DIY方面的课程，擅长做水果沙拉。经常关心他人，从不说别人的坏话。她有一副好嗓子，长大后想成为一名杰出的歌手。她希望和家人环游世界并更多地了解这个世界。

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend---Lucy

Lucy is my best friend. She has round face.and big eyes. She looks sweet.

She is very patiet with other people. and often cares about others. She never says a bad word about others. She has a good voice and in a singing competition sang best and won the first prize. As for her ideal school, she hopes it will start at 9 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m.every day. She will just have only an hour’s homework so she has enough time to do after-school activities. She looks forward to her ideal school.

Because she is good at singsing, she wants to be an excellent singer when she grows up. She hopes she will travel around the world with her family and learn more about the world.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。