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8．中秋节是中国最重要的传统节日之一．假设你的美国笔友Mike想了解一下中秋节的情况，请你根据下表所提供的信息写一篇70词左右的英语短文，向他简单介绍中秋节．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

时间	每年阴历八月十五日．
方式	在那一天，人们通常回家与家人共聚晚餐．人们还会吃月饼，有各种各样的月饼，比如豆馅、蛋黄馅、果仁馅或肉馅等．晚饭过后，许多人喜欢赏月．
象征	人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征，在那天人们互相表达美好的祝福．

提示词：August 15^th of the Lunar calendar （阴历八月十五）； mooncake（月饼）；round（圆的）；bean paste（豆馅）；egg-yolk（蛋黄）；nut（果仁）；appreciate the moon（赏月）；express（表达）；a symbol of reunion（团圆的象征）；fortune（财富）
It is on August 15^th of the Lunar calendar every year．On that day，people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family．They also eat mooncakes．There are all kinds of mooncakes，some have bean paste in them，and some have egg-yolk，nuts，meat or other things inside．After dinner，many people like to appreciate the moon．
People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion，luck and fortune，so they express best wishes to each other on that day．．

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分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是介绍中秋节．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1时间：每年阴历八月十五日．
2方式：在那一天，人们通常回家与家人共聚晚餐．人们还会吃月饼，有各种各样的月饼，比如豆馅、蛋黄馅、果仁馅或肉馅等．晚饭过后，许多人喜欢赏月
3象征：人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征，在那天人们互相表达美好的祝福．
常用到的重点短语：
go back  回到…
a symble of …标志
each other 彼此
all kinds of  多样的
【高分句型】
1．The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China
one of+the+最高级+名词复数  最怎么样的某某之一，最高级的用法
2．On that day，people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family．
动词不定式做目的状语
3．People believe①that the moon is a symbol of reunion，luck and fortune，②so they express best wishes to each other on that day．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为believe的宾语
②so表示所以．连词，表示因果关系，引出下文．

解答 The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China．【高分句型】It is on August 15^th of the Lunar calendar every year．（每年阴历八月十五日．）On that day，people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family．【高分句型】They also eat mooncakes．There are all kinds of mooncakes，some have bean paste in them，and some have egg-yolk，nuts，meat or other things inside．After dinner，many people like to appreciate the moon．（方式在那一天，人们通常回家与家人共聚晚餐．人们还会吃月饼，有各种各样的月饼，比如豆馅、蛋黄馅、果仁馅或肉馅等．晚饭过后，许多人喜欢赏月）
   People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion，luck and fortune，so they express best wishes to each other on that day．（人们认为月亮是团圆、运气、财富的象征，在那天人们互相表达美好的祝福）【高分句型】

点评 本题是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，内容是向外国朋友介绍中国的传统节日-中秋节，写作时要注意要点齐全，不能漏写，并且要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．