Question

【题目】提示：1、介绍一次你难忘的校园旅行。

2、叙述一下你在旅行中的经历、活动等。

3、描述一下你的感受。

要求：条理清晰，语法正确；字迹工整；字数在80-120之间。

Answer 1

【答案】My School Trip

Last school trip, I went to the beach with my classmates on the bus. We had great fun playing on the beach, swimming in the water, surfing, fishing and we took many photos there. Later we visited the zoo. We saw many different kinds animals there. There were monkeys, zebras and so on. Some were big, others were small. In the afternoon, we went to the shop and bought many gifts. Finally, we had a big sea food dinner. We were tired, but really happy. It was my best school trip.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍一次你难忘的校园旅行。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I went to……，We had great fun playing……，We saw…..，There were……，We were……，It was……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。