Question

书面表达 (共20分)

假设你是李磊，特丽莎是你的笔友。她想了解一下中国的传统节日。请根据下列内容提示，给她回信，介绍一下中国人是如何庆祝春节的。80词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

内容提示：

①春节the Spring Festival：one of the most important traditional festivals; about 2000 years old

②庆祝时间：be celebrated in January or February

③国家法定节假日：have seven days off

④庆祝方式：a traditional dinner, make dumplings, watch TV programmes, wear new clothes, visit friends, get Hongbao, play fireworks（放鞭炮）

Hi Teresa,

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Hey, why don’t you come to China and spend the festival with us this year? It will be great fun.

Yours,

Li Lei

 

Answer 1

Hi Teresa,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you want to learn about Chinese traditional festivals in your last letter. Now I’d like to introduce one of the most important festivals—Spring Festival to you.

The Spring Festival is about 2,000 years old. It is usually celebrated in January or February. During the Spring Festival, we can have seven days off to prepare for it and celebrate it. We have many customs to celebrate it. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we often have a big dinner with our family, eat dumplings, set off fireworks and watch Spring Gala on TV. Children can get lucky money from their grandparents and parents. On Spring Festival, we often wear new clothes and visit friends. We often wish each other good luck in the coming new year.

Hey, why don’t you come to China and spend the festival with us this year? It will be great fun.

Yours,

Li Lei

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以李磊的身份，给Teresa写一封信，给她讲讲关于中国的传统节日-春节的事情。题目中给我们列出了一些主要的内容，如春节的简单介绍、庆祝的时间、方式等。我们需要将这些信息加以充实，用正确的英语表达出来。春节是我们比较熟悉的一个节日，关于春节的风俗我们也是比较了解，例如除夕，我们要吃团圆饭，看春晚；春节那天我们要穿新衣服，要去拜年。小朋友们会得到压岁钱，放鞭炮等。要说春节的特色美食，那就是饺子了。因此在这篇文章中，我们会有话可说。但是我们需要注意，要把这些内容有条理的表达出来，并且要符合英语的表达习惯。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用第一人称，一般现在时态。写作时，我们要注意长句和短句的搭配使用，并尽量使用好的句型和短语，使文章整体表达流畅，有节奏感。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文。作者在信中给我们详细的介绍了春节的一些习俗。首先，作者先点明，春节是中国最重要的节日之一，Now I’d like to introduce one of the most important festivals—Spring Festival to you.。在第二段中，作者详细的介绍了春节的习俗，包括吃团圆饭、看春晚、要压岁钱、拜年、穿新衣等。这一部分是文章的主体，使用了较多的句型和短语，例如It is usually celebrated in January or February. During the Spring Festival、On the eve of the Spring Festival, we often have a big dinner with our family, eat dumplings, set off fireworks and watch Spring Gala on TV、On Spring Festival, we often wear new clothes and visit friends等。最后向Teresa发出邀请，让她来一起过春节。整篇短文内容完整，意思连贯，使用了被动语态、复合句、固定的短语等，使文章表达流畅。

考点：提纲类作文。