Question

15．假如你是韩梅，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请根据e-mail的内容，给他写一封回信．与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难．
提示词语：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，get along with，
smile

Dear Han Mei， I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently．My mother talks too much to me．She always tells me，"Be careful while crossing the street．""Put on more clothes．""Did you do a good job at school？"and so on．I'm annoyed（烦恼）．What shall I do？Can you give me some ideas？ Alice

Dear Alice，
                 ．
                                                               Han Mei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．
句中"If your mother doesn't take your advice"为"if"引导的条件状语从句，句中涉及的短语有"take one's advice 采纳某人的建议"．这句话意为：如果你妈妈不采纳你的建议，只需要保持沉默并且给她微笑．
高分句型二：
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．
句中"what I say here can help you a lot"为宾语从句，其中宾语从句中"what I say here"为主语从句，在从句中做主语．这句话意为：我希望我在这儿说的话可以帮助你．

解答 Dear Alice，
As a teenager，I met the same problem as you．But now I can get along better with my mother．Here are some ideas for you．（开篇点题）
Your mother talks much，because she cares about you．Maybe it shows your mother's love．So I think you should listen to her．If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you're thinking about．If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile．【高分句型一】（提出建议）
I hope what I say here can help you a lot．【高分句型二】（表达祝福）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Han Mei

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