Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你是李磊，请根据提示写一篇短文介绍自己。

1．两年前生活习惯不好，常感冒. 总是一个人待在家里。

2．医生建议要有健康的生活方式。

3. 我早睡早起，不吃垃圾食品，吃更多蔬菜，喝更多牛奶和水。

4. 锻炼身体和好的饮食习惯帮助我取得了好成绩。

Answer 1

【答案】

My name is Li Wei. Two years ago I often had a cold because I had an unhealthy lifestyle. I always stayed at home with nobody. The doctor told me to have a healthy lifestyle. I listened to the doctor’s advice. Now I go to bed early and get up early. I don’t eat junk food often but eat more vegetables and drink more water and milk every day. I exercise once a day and have a healthy diet. Exercise and good eating habits help me get better grades than before.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一篇文章来介绍自己。首先，要认真审题，掌握题目要求中的要点信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。要点为：

1. 两年前生活习惯不好，常感冒. 总是一个人待在家里。

2．医生建议要有健康的生活方式。

3. 我早睡早起，不吃垃圾食品，吃更多蔬菜，喝更多牛奶和水。

4. 锻炼身体和好的饮食习惯帮助我取得了好成绩。

写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。一般过去时态和一般现在时态的使用非常准确，固定短语“have a cold；stay at home；tell sb to do sth；listen to the one’s advice”等以及复合句和比较级句型的正确使用“Two years ago I often had a cold because I had an unhealthy lifestyle. Exercise and good eating habits help me get better grades than before.”，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。