Question

【题目】假如你是北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹来北京旅游．请根据以下提示

给她写一封信，并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的（well﹣mannered）中学生．

写作要点：

1、欢迎她来北京．

2、介绍北京的情况．

（1）下周天气：白天最高温度超过330C；

（2）交通方式：最好乘坐地铁；

（3）必去的名胜：长城．

3、对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议．

写作要求：

1、不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．

2、可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．

3、字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰．

4、至少80词．

Dear Li Lan，

How are you doing？

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Li．

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Lan，

How are you doing？Welcome to Beijing．Beijing is located in the east of China and attracts more and more people at home and abroad to visit，study and even lived there for a long time．The reason why beijing is so popular is that it is neither hot in summer nor cold in winter．Not only is it the capital of china，but also it is recognized as the political，educational，and culture center．If you want to have an enjoyable journey，I suggest you climb the great wall．Because the famous saying in China is that the man who does not reach the great wall is not a true man．The weather will be hot next weekends and the highest temperature is above 30 degrees． So you should wear cool clothes．The transportation is very convenient because the subway nearly covers the whole city．So you had better take the subway to go out．

Beijing is a civilized city and you should be a civilized student．Zunlaoaiyou is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation．If you sit next to the old or the sick，please take the initiative seat．

Looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Li

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以来“北京旅游”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一封书信。介绍北京的情况，以及写出文明旅游的要求。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中Welcome to, the capital of, take the subway, had better, looking forward to，and、so 等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如:句型not only...but also...；宾语从句、条件状语从句、原因状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。