Question

【题目】书面表达

某中学自开展“向阳光少年学习”的活动以来，我们的身边涌现了许许多多的“阳光少年”，请你以“A Sunshine Teenager”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身边的“阳光少年”（假如这位阳光少年名叫XiaoHui）。

要点提示：

1. 星座是Aries, 诚实善良、乐于助人；

2. 最喜欢黄色，因为黄色….(请自拟一点)

3. 积极参加各种课外活动, 上周参加绘画比赛并获第一名。

4. 积极为父母分忧, 比如…(请举一例)；

5. 你的感想（请自拟两点）

写作要求：

1.词数不少于90（开头已给出，不计入总数）;

2.内容完整，语言流畅，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

Hello! My name is Xiao Ming. Our school had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us.

Xiao Hui is one of them. _______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hello! My name is Xiao Ming.I’m studying in No.1. Middle School. Our school had an activity “Learn from Sunshine Teenagers”. From then on, there are many sunshine teenagers around us.

Aries is one of them.He is honest and kind. He gets on well with others.He is always ready to not only help others but also go to the old people’s homes to do something for the olds.He reads newspapers for them, cleans their rooms and washes their clothes. Also, he is warm-hearted, active and outgoing.He always shares all kinds of his parents ’housework, like doing the dishes, sweeping the floor and making dinner. He is never afraid of different difficulties. He works very hard and he likes reading. And he takes an active part in all kinds of sports.After school, he plays football with his teammates. And he joins the school clubs, like music,art and chess. He learns a lot from his all activities.

Aries is my good sunshine teenager.I should learn from him.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。