Question

【题目】作文。

假设你叫王华，收到笔友徐丽的email。她向你请教如何合理安排寒假生活。请你根据下列提示用英语回复徐丽的email。

要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；2.回信需要包括所有要点，并适当发挥。3.词数不少于90词 (文章开头和结尾，不计入总词数)。

Dear Xu Li,

How time flies! I’m happy to talk about my coming winter vacation.

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I’m looking forward to your e-mail about your winter vacation.

All the best!

Wang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Daer Xu Li,

How time flies! I’m happy to talk about your coming winter vocation.

First, doing more exercises can provide you with better health. Second, travelling can relax yourself and you can enjoy your winter holiday. Third, it is useful to take part in some social activities. It can enrich your experiences. Last but not least, you also can learn something useful at home. It will make you easier to study in the future.

I’m looking forward to your reply about your meaningful winter vocation.

All the best!

Wang Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文内容要求你写一封书信，应以一般现在时态叙事为主。文章应灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点： 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如: provide you with better health，take part in, make you easier, in the future， doing more exercises动名词词组作主语，it is useful to take part in some social activities.句型等；同时First, second, third等词的应用使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理；通篇语言流畅、内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。