题目内容
书面表达 (本大题共5分)
假设你是李华,在网上看到了Wildlife Protection Club (野生动物保护俱乐部) 招募志愿者的广告。请你用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席Mr. Brown,申请加入该俱乐部,并表示,如果能加入,将会很开心。请根据表格信息和提示完成申请信。
学校 | Sunshine Secondary School |
年级 | 八年级 |
品德 | 勤奋, 乐于助人 |
爱好 | 篮球和旅游,从小喜爱动物 |
申请理由 | …… |
联系方式 | 0510—87654321,lihua@sunshinetown.com |
注意:1.词数70左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.信须包括所有要点,申请理由用2-3句适当发挥;
3.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Brown,
I read your advertisement on the Internet and I would like to join the Wildlife Protection Club.
I am a student in Grade 8 at Sunshine Secondary School. I am very hard-working and helpful. I love playing basketball and travelling. I loved animals when I was very young. I would like to learn more about animals. And I
hope to do something for animals.
I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club. Please call me on 0515-87654321 or e-mail me at lihua@sunshinetown.com.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,李华写给野生动物保护俱乐部主席布朗先生的一封申请信。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I would like to...;I am ...;I hope to...;I will be....等句式的运用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达了期望收到布朗先生的回信的意愿。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头李华介绍了自己想要加入野生动物保护俱乐部,接下来介绍自己的基本情况:身份、性格、爱好,最后介绍了自己的联系方式。此处on the Internet,would like to do sth, love doing sth, hope to do sth, look forward to doing sth 等这些词组的运用以及if引导的条件状语从句 if I can be a member of your club.的运用也让文章增色不少。
考点:提纲作文。
写作(15分)
最近,教育部启动了“阳光体育”健身活动计划,建议全国中小学生每天锻炼一小时,让他们健康、快乐。此项活动受到广大学生的欢迎。李华对所在学校参加活动的情况和反映做了一个调查。请你根据下面调查表的内容,帮他给校报写一篇报道。
注意:
1.报道的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.词数80左右。
Interviewees(调查对象) | Activities | Feelings | Reasons |
most students | play sports | interested | to have lots of fun |
many students | skip(跳绳) | happy | to keep healthy |
some students | take a walk | relaxed | to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom |
a few students | worried | no enough room(空间) | on the playground; no enough time to finish homework |
The “Sunshine Sports” program is warmly welcomed in our school.Nearly all the students have taken part in it.
No matter what students think about the program, all the students like the idea which is to make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.