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【题目】文段表达（共15分）

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。

假如你叫Liu Ying，你的好朋友Jane考试前总是紧张。尽管她刻苦学习，但一开始考试，她就忘了所有东西。她感觉自己好笨，也为此而感到苦恼。于是她通过邮件向你寻求帮助，请根据她的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：nervous, stupid, clever, achieve, goals, when, attention, if, get

To Jane From Liu Ying Subject I believe you can do it Hi! Jane, I’m sorry to hear about your problem and hope I can help. _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Ying

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Hi! Jane,

I’m sorry to hear about your problem and hope I can help.

Sometimes, I have the same feeling as you. I also feel a little nervous before exams. Maybe everyone does. So I don’t think you are stupid and you are always clever in my mind.

Trust yourself. If you study hard every day, you’ll achieve your goals. When you’re taking your exam, pay attention to the questions and think over your answers and don’t worry about your grades. If you worry too much, it won’t help you get good results.

I hope my advice helps. Please write to me again if you need any more help.

Yours,

Liu Ying

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，通过回复邮件帮助朋友解决问题。结合所给提示，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，二人称。文中要表达对Jane的理解及解决的一些办法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己也有这样的问题，劝Jane要对自己有信心，相信自己，并表达了自己的一些建议。此处pay attention to,worry about等这些词组的运用以及if引导的时间状语从句的运用也让文章增色不少。