Question

【题目】假设你们年级正在举办一场时装秀。请根据下面的几个要点问题，结合本单元所学的

知识，写一篇60词左右的英语短文，介绍一下这场时装秀的情况。

要点问题：

1.When does it begin?

2.Who are going for the fashion show?

3.What clothes can we see at the show?

4.What do you think of the show?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】It is 6:00 p.m. now. The students and teachers in Grade 7 are having a fashion show in the school hall. Many students are wearing clothes designed by themselves to join in the show.

Sandy, from Class 2, is showing a coat. It is made of wool. Millie, from Class 3, is wearing a long silk dress. It’s fit for summer. Amy, from Class 4, looks pretty in a pair of leather boots.I think those students are great and the show is wonderful.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据所列举的几个要点问题，介绍一下时装秀的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要用现在进行时态来表达，人称为第三人称，作文要从四个方面去写，时装秀的开始时间，哪些人要参加时装秀表演，在时装秀上能看到哪些衣服，最后要发表自己的个人观点。注意主谓一致问题，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。