Question

【题目】书面表达

为了保护我们的母亲河—秦淮河，Sunshine school 英语俱乐部准备举行一次慈善行走活动。交流学生Max对此非常感兴趣，想进一步了解相关信息。请你根据海报内容用英文给他写一封邮件，介绍此项活动。

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数 80 左右，邮件的开头和署名已经给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Max,

As part of the Qinhuai River are still polluted with lots of waste, _____________________________________________________________

Yours, Li Hai

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Max,

As part of the Qinhuai River are still polluted with lots of waste, we decide to organize a charity walk to make people realize the importance of environmental protection.

We are going to be divided into four groups, and each group separately collects garbage according to the prescribed routes. We plan to pick up waste paper, peel, cans and other garbage along the river. we’ll also hand out leaflets to tourists to promote environmental protection knowledge. Finally, We’ll sell garbage to waste station and all the money goes to charity. This activity will be held on the morning of June 30th,2019, and it will last three hours(from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.).

Would you like to go? Come and join us!

Yours, Li Hai

【解析】

本篇文章是写一个活动计划，应该用一般将来时，第一人称叙述。要点要包括做这次活动的原因以及活动过程。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，运用了被动语态，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be divided into，pick up，hand out等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。