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4.暑假即将来到,同学们都相互询问如何度过这个较长的假期,好好放松一下.请你用英文书信或e-mail的形式把你的计划和同学交流一下,以便更好地安排一个充实又有意义的假期.
要点提示:
1.坚持运动,锻炼身体;
2.多读好书;
3.去旅游观光;
4.当一名志愿者;
5.帮助父母.
要求:1.内容包括所有提示要点,意思完整,语言规范;
2.可适当发挥,增加细节,使语句连贯、通顺;
3.80个词左右,书信的首尾已写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Li Ping,
I'm excited that the summer vacation is coming.Here is my vacation plan to show you.
First I'll do sports as usual and learn to play table tennis.It's good for my health.Then I plan to readsome great books to improve myself.After that,I'll enjoy an interesting sight for two weeks.Also,I want to be a volunteer to serve in the volleyball games in Baotou.Of course,I would like to help my parents do some cooking,washing and so on.
I think I'll have a good time in the vacation.
May you have a nice summer vacation!
Wang Hui.

分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是写一封信或e-mail把你的暑假计划和同学交流一下,以便更好地安排一个充实又有意义的假期.注意信件的格式,时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时.人称主要为第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.坚持运动,锻炼身体;
2.多读好书;
3.去旅游观光;
4.当一名志愿者;
5.帮助父母
常用到的重点短语:
do sports做运动
as usual和平常一样
learn to do sth 学着去做某事
be good for 对…有益
plan to do sth计划做某事
want to be想要成为…
of course当然
would like to do sth 想要做某事
have a good time玩的开心
高分句型:
1.Then①I plan to read some great books②to improve myself.
①plan to do sth计划做某事
②to improve myself动词不定式作为目的状语.
2.I think ①I'll②have a good time in the vacation.
①本句是含有省略了that的宾语从句.充当think的宾语.
②have a good time玩的开心

解答 Dear Li Ping,
I'm excited that the summer vacation is coming.Here is my vacation plan to show you.(引起下文,点题)
First I'll do sports as usual and learn to play table tennis.It's good for my health.(坚持运动,锻炼身体)Then I plan to read some great books to improve myself.(高分句型)(多读好书)After that,I'll enjoy an interesting sight for two weeks.(去旅游观光)Also,I want to be a volunteer to serve in the volleyball games in Baotou.(当一名志愿者)Of course,I would like to help my parents do some cooking,washing and so on.(帮助父母)
I think I'll have a good time in the vacation.(高分句型)
May you have a nice summer vacation!(发出祝愿)
Wang Hui

点评 这是一篇提纲作文.考生在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容.尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容,避免使用无把握或偏、难句型.注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯.

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