题目内容
【题目】人生如旅。在你的成长过程中,许多人感动着你也影响着你,如:父母、老师、朋友、故事中的人……假设最近你们市正举行以“The person who has influenced me most”为话题的中学生英语征文活动,Spud Webb深深地影响着你,请根据表格中的内容要点完成征文。
Spud Webb | |
基本情况 | 1.个头矮小,梦想进入NBA 2.一直为梦想而奋斗 3.1985年成为NBA球员 |
成功原因 | 1.…… 2.…… |
对我的影响 | …… |
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3.词数:100词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
【答案】The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
Spud Webb was born in 1963 in the USA.He was short then, but he had a big dream—to play basketball in the NBA.He was fighting for his dream since his childhood.As a saying goes,“Where there is a will, there is a way.” In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn't lose heart or give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height.Second, he was able to take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot.When I face difficulty in my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一个对自己影响最大的人-Spud Webb,题目中给出了这个人的基本情况介绍,但是不完整,他成功的原因以及对你的影响这两部分内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力,补充完整。因此写作的时候,要首先对这两部分的内容进行规划,充实内容,使文章完整。其次要注意这篇短文的时态,应该用一般现在时态和一般过去时态,根据具体表达的内容确定,变化动词的形式。最后要注意使用符合英语表达习惯的词汇、句型和短语,不能逐句翻译。句子之间使用适当的过度词,如副词、连词等,使文意连贯,表达流畅。