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20．假如你是李华，请围绕以下几个方面给你的笔友 Tom 写封信，谈谈你初中毕业后暑假的打算．（开头和结尾已给出）1．经过繁忙的复习、考试后，想在假期中休息一下；做自己喜欢做的事…
2．多与父母交流，帮助做家务．
3．参加社会实践（如：帮助老人、残疾人等），增加对社会的了解． 
注意：1．文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称．
2．字数：80 词左右（已给出的句子不计入总词数）．
DearTom，
How are you getting on the sedays？I've just finished my most important exam．After workinghard for a long time，I really want to have a good rest during the summervacation．First，I'm going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books．Then，it's time tocommunicate with my parents．I wish to share my happiness and sadness withthem．Besides，I plan to help do some housework．At last，I hope to be a volunteer，helping the old and disabled as much aspossible．In this way，I can know about the world better．
By the way，howwill you spend your vacation？

Best wishes!

                                                Yours，
                                                LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是围绕初中毕业后暑假的打算给笔友写一封信．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从三方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．经过繁忙的复习、考试后，想在假期中休息一下；做自己喜欢做的事…
2．多与父母交流，帮助做家务．
3．参加社会实践（如：帮助老人、残疾人等），增加对社会的了解． 
常用到的重点句型和短语：
First…then..besides…at last…首先…然后…另外…最后…
it's time to do sth做某事的时间到了
share…with sb和某人分享…
plan to do sth计划去做某事
as…as possible尽可能…
by the way顺便说一声
参考句子：
After working hard for a long time，I really want to have a good rest during the summer vacation．
句中after+doing实际是一个从句，after I worked hard for a long time，主从句的主语一致，故这里省略了从句的主语和谓语．
At last，I hope to be a volunteer，helping the old and disabled as much as possible．（高分句型）
句中helping the old and disabled as much as possible是动名词短语作为伴随状语，as much as possible尽可能多的．

解答 Dear Tom，
How are you getting on these days？I've just finished my most important exam．After working hard for a long time，I really want to have a good rest during the summer vacation．（高分句型）（考试后休息）First，I'm going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books．（做自己想做的）Then，it's time to communicate with my parents．I wish to share my happiness and sadness with them．（与父母交流）Besides，I plan to help do some housework．（帮忙做家务）At last，I hope to be a volunteer，helping the old and disabled as much as possible．（高分句型）In this way，I can know about the world better．（社会实践）
By the way，how will you spend your vacation？
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．