Question

【题目】书面表达

为响应我县全面创建国家卫生文明城市的号召，我校开展了“绿色射阳，健康生活 ”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

注意： 1. 词数在100词左右；

2. 文中不得提及考生自己的真实姓名。

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Sheyang, it’s our duty to _______________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

(One possible version)

The Green City, the Healthy Life

As a citizen of Sheyang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It's better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy. And we'd better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.

In my opinion, I'll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一篇文章，主题为绿色射阳，健康生活。首先，要认真审题，掌握来信中的信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。结合以下要点：绿色生活方式，以及绿色生活的目的，展开细节，适当补充。写作中注意上下文的过度，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。各种短语句型表达的使用非常准确，固定短语“in this way，live a healthy life, In my opinion, In a word, make a difference等”以及复合句“As a citizen of Sheyang, it's our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life.以及Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room.”的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。