Question

【题目】写作

学校要成立动物保护社团，请同学们写一篇有关动物保护的文章。请你选一种濒危动物，说说它濒危的原因以及我们该怎样保护它们。不少于50词，所给提示词语仅供选用。

提示词语: lose, enough, environment, in order to, raise, develop, feed

提示问题：

1. What animal is in danger? How dangerous is it?

2. Why is it in danger?

3. What can we do to save them?

Answer 1

【答案】Everyone knows animals are our friends. So we should be friendly to them. The amount of some animals is very small such as pandas, golden monkeys and so on. Golden monkeys are in danger. The number of them left is less than twenty thousand around the world. Because people cut down trees, they lose their home. They don’t get enough food to raise their children. The environment is worse and worse for golden monkeys. Even some people kill them in order to get money. That will makes golden monkeys disappear soon.

We should let people know the importance of protecting wildlife. Protecting animals means protecting ourselves! I think our government should punish those people who kill the wild animals. It is our duty to protect the endangered animals. Let us start from now, starts from me, and protect animal, make the world more beautiful!

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文。话题是写一篇有关动物保护的文章。仔细阅读所给提示，审清主题，根据内容要点，列出本文的写作提纲。本文时态主要是一般现在时。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系，内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，不要写的太少。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：每个人都知道动物是我们的朋友。所以我们应该对他们友好。一些动物的数量非常少，如熊猫、金丝猴等。金丝猴处于危险之中。剩下的不到两万人。因为人们砍伐树木，他们失去了家园。他们没有足够的食物来抚养孩子。金丝猴的环境越来越差。甚至有些人为了赚钱而杀了他们。这将使金丝猴很快消失。

我们应该让人们知道保护野生动物的重要性。保护动物就是保护我们自己！我认为我们的政府应该惩罚那些杀害野生动物的人。保护濒危动物是我们的责任。让我们从现在开始，从我开始，保护动物，让世界更加美丽！